Here I tried to cool down the house, though I was afraid it would recede too far. It ended up looking ok to me. I also added some hills, and cows and hay bales, and another fence… sheesh! The composition is an improvement again, but I overworked the sky, and the grass, and the fence posts are too bright. They should be almost silhouetted considering where the Sun is. This is more successful than previous attempts, but it still feels cloyingly amateurish.
